I liked this poem because it was very long and you made it very interesting. I especially like the names of the main characters and the antagonist. It was a little bit blurry but no matter what the cost this poem was great. This reminds me of Hansel and Gretel because of the dark forest and the fat he sending his child for something. Overall Great Blog Post.
Carlos, Great Nonsense poem, I really enjoyed it ��! I think it was pretty funny, and unexpected that you had a murderous monster, named something that sounded so sweet! I mean a CuddlyNuffel sounds like something that's adorable! I think you also did a good job making part of the poem rhyme, and had very interesting nonsense words, that made the poem humorous. I also think that your picture fit very well with the poem, and while I think the nonsense words were creating a humorous tone for the poem, the picture and the rest of the poem had an eerie, creepy tone, which added to the uniqueness of the poem! So, overall, as you can see, I think you wrote an amazing nonsense poem, and I would enjoy reading more poems that you may write in the future. P.S. you're message at the end of the poem I think made my day!
I liked this poem because it was very long and you made it very interesting. I especially like the names of the main characters and the antagonist. It was a little bit blurry but no matter what the cost this poem was great. This reminds me of Hansel and Gretel because of the dark forest and the fat he sending his child for something. Overall Great Blog Post.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the poem sort of mysterious and serious. I think the background reminded think of Slender Man
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ReplyDeleteGreat Nonsense poem, I really enjoyed it ��! I think it was pretty funny, and unexpected that you had a murderous monster, named something that sounded so sweet! I mean a CuddlyNuffel sounds like something that's adorable! I think you also did a good job making part of the poem rhyme, and had very interesting nonsense words, that made the poem humorous. I also think that your picture fit very well with the poem, and while I think the nonsense words were creating a humorous tone for the poem, the picture and the rest of the poem had an eerie, creepy tone, which added to the uniqueness of the poem! So, overall, as you can see, I think you wrote an amazing nonsense poem, and I would enjoy reading more poems that you may write in the future. P.S. you're message at the end of the poem I think made my day!
I like how you used the wrath of the "cuddly nuffels" because it sounds like a pink furry pet. Great post!
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