Carlos, I like how you explain your love for computers, then move to your love of outside. It seems like you have a balance in your life.
Your poem really helped me realize how passionate you are for ceviche and technology. That reminds me of some of my family members. What I mostly liked about your poem was that you put "The smiling sun was scary." Alliteration is fun!
Great job using figurative language. For some reason your pictures weren't coming up..hmm.
Carlos,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explain your love for computers, then move to your love of outside. It seems like you have a balance in your life.
Your poem really helped me realize how passionate you are for ceviche and technology. That reminds me of some of my family members. What I mostly liked about your poem was that you put "The smiling sun was scary." Alliteration is fun!
ReplyDeleteGreat job using figurative language. For some reason your pictures weren't coming up..hmm.
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